Well let's start with the front cover now I look back on it I absolutely HATE it. First of all the name what was I think I think I literally took a fairytale path on that one let's scrap that idea for my music magazine.next the feature names surrounding images underlining is a big NO why would I even do that 'TACKY'.Also why on earth is one of my sub-headings for an article in italic is wasn't even aware of that until I discussed my pages with my teacher.Also the images as I look now makes me feel abit uneasy it looks like I was standing by some lockers and taking a picture I wasn't it just looks like I have over edited it.The sell-line at the bottom doesn't even make sense and the mast-head isn't even noticeable therefore I feel I need to correct that immediately as my star student star has just confused the text.Finally the font thats mainly okay however the writing font in the star student looks like it's been done by a child.
However thing that I feel went well was the images I know it was abit confusing I liked the actual photo's itself. Also I feel the actual structure and layout I just need to make some things stand out. I also feel the whole barcodes and the pricing made it look quite conventional and professional so overall I feel I can do a-lot of improvements but not a bad attempt.
Contents Page Review:
overall I feel my content pages went quite well however...
We feel the headshots on the side of the page are not in the rule of three or something I dunno we are getting taught that soon.However I completely understand they they are not inline and it make the bottom girl look abit left out.Also I have sort of miss numbered my pages as I put my first page which is my front page as not the first page according to my content pages it's a interview.Needs to be fixed I know.
However I really do like the image that actual holds the information for what pages are what I feel the image is different it sort of says people aren't that important reading however is.the image itself is so clear that it makes my contents page look a lot more professional than it is. Also I like the fact that it's not that over powered with information all on all I feel this preliminary page is something I should be proud of because it was my first go.
However thing that I feel went well was the images I know it was abit confusing I liked the actual photo's itself. Also I feel the actual structure and layout I just need to make some things stand out. I also feel the whole barcodes and the pricing made it look quite conventional and professional so overall I feel I can do a-lot of improvements but not a bad attempt.
Contents Page Review:
overall I feel my content pages went quite well however...
We feel the headshots on the side of the page are not in the rule of three or something I dunno we are getting taught that soon.However I completely understand they they are not inline and it make the bottom girl look abit left out.Also I have sort of miss numbered my pages as I put my first page which is my front page as not the first page according to my content pages it's a interview.Needs to be fixed I know.
However I really do like the image that actual holds the information for what pages are what I feel the image is different it sort of says people aren't that important reading however is.the image itself is so clear that it makes my contents page look a lot more professional than it is. Also I like the fact that it's not that over powered with information all on all I feel this preliminary page is something I should be proud of because it was my first go.
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