learned to extened my critical ananlysis and this has helped my to think of ideas that i could prephaps use in my own blogs.
Aprils:April your work is fabulous.your preliminary pages my opion could have already been a school magazine and already being enjoyed by parents.you colour scheme worked really well together however it didn't really match the colours of the school and I can see from the ties of the students in the photos.although I really do love this magazine and if I was a head-teacher id happily sell this at my school.
07/10/2014
I have commented on other work to help them find there fonts and titles therefore this has helped me in my linking between my genre and magazine
kara
charlotte green8 October 2014 06:25
I really like the top one because it's different to alot of magazines titles and fonts already out there.
All of this has helped me with my own work as i have relised some things that will be good to add into my work and also high lighted any bad ideas that i might have had.
All of this has helped me with my own work as i have relised some things that will be good to add into my work and also high lighted any bad ideas that i might have had.
April I think you front page is developing really well as the colours scheme you are going with really reflects the genre of music you are creating this magazine for.
I like that the central image isn't to in your face and is quite casual as this is a very different from a conventional magazine image.At first I throught the color scheme was abit grey which is maybe what you were trying to go for,however now that the purple band is across the bottom, I feel it brings alot of life and color to the magazine and opens so much more opputunity's for more colors.Also I think the fonts are really well sutied and it is clear what the main story will be,Also the fact that there are some faded images behind the Article spoilers on the front page can also help draw another type of audience like people who like the hunger games.
I really love how the 'Wallflower' is developing.
I like that the central image isn't to in your face and is quite casual as this is a very different from a conventional magazine image.At first I throught the color scheme was abit grey which is maybe what you were trying to go for,however now that the purple band is across the bottom, I feel it brings alot of life and color to the magazine and opens so much more opputunity's for more colors.Also I think the fonts are really well sutied and it is clear what the main story will be,Also the fact that there are some faded images behind the Article spoilers on the front page can also help draw another type of audience like people who like the hunger games.
I really love how the 'Wallflower' is developing.
'Break Free' is coming along really well.The colors match really well together and it's starting to look like an actual pop magazine that you would find and pick up in the shops.I like the images and can clearly see what the main story will be as the font is clearly defined from everything else.The fonts are clear and clean and easy to read making it easy to read meaning the font you have chosen can maybe entise people to keep reading.The format and layout is fine and overall it's not confusing at all.
Things that I would maybe have a think about are the really bright pink at the bottom of the front page as it's not apart of the suttle colours you have going in the rest of the magazine and also how that pink doen't appear on any other part of your front cover or contents page.However I really like how 'Break Free' is developing.
Giving this feedback to others has shown me some ways I can maybe improve my own magazine and also has helped steer me away from ideas I maybe had that are not to good looking back on them.
Things that I would maybe have a think about are the really bright pink at the bottom of the front page as it's not apart of the suttle colours you have going in the rest of the magazine and also how that pink doen't appear on any other part of your front cover or contents page.However I really like how 'Break Free' is developing.
Giving this feedback to others has shown me some ways I can maybe improve my own magazine and also has helped steer me away from ideas I maybe had that are not to good looking back on them.
